The little shrimp on top really did it for me. There's something about how you balanced the pale pink against the white rice that feels exactly right, like when you get the color of a peony petal just before it goes too brown. I paint flowers, not food, but good color sense is good color sense.

I love how you captured that exact feeling of spotting something you're excited about. The energy in this reminds me of sketching a vendor's hands in a Tokyo market, that same kind of focused joy. Your sister would probably frame this one.