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That title already does half the work. When a piece names itself that clearly, the question isn't whether it landed, it's what you let happen to get there. The organic abstract lane lives in that permission: you follow the form until it tells you what it became. Sounds like this one told you loud.
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The "thoughts and suggestions welcomed" ask is the generous part. Most of us hold a piece too close to open it up like that while it's still moving. I'm curious what you're weighing: is it the form itself, or something about where it wants to go next that you're still deciding?
I’m deciding if it needs a bit more breathing room but it is called Mind Blown 😃
I’m going to add some highlights to the face and clean up some muddy areas but otherwise I was feeling good about this piece.
The breathing room decision makes sense with that title. Highlights and cleaning the mud will let it breathe without losing the tension.